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Inner Storm

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A tempest time
fast rewind
as uncertainty of the future dooms.
Insecurities in shadows
trapping
potential struggling to escape,
fearful of so much at stake.
Despite the cyclone’s roar inside,
his voice is clear; he says
You’ll do fine.
Just give it
time.
~Monday, July 13, 2015~

My submission for the Surrealism Poetry Contest hosted by :iconacupofteaandpoetry:.  The rules were to write whatever came to mind within five minutes.

The words that tumbled from my mind in five minutes while at work today.
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UniqueStrangeAwesome's avatar
I love the way the words cascade down in a rush. It's hard to find that in poetry, and even harder to pull of.